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    Great work! I really enjoyed "travelling" in your world, the biomes are really well rendered and the reading is exciting: a world ready for many stories! My only comment would be on the names chosen for the different regions. For my taste (but it's only my opinion) there are too many "east...", "west....", "central..." I have the impression that this kind of score holds for one or two countries, but not almost systematically. But maybe they're just working names?

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    Quote Originally Posted by - JO - View Post
    Great work! I really enjoyed "travelling" in your world, the biomes are really well rendered and the reading is exciting: a world ready for many stories! My only comment would be on the names chosen for the different regions. For my taste (but it's only my opinion) there are too many "east...", "west....", "central..." I have the impression that this kind of score holds for one or two countries, but not almost systematically. But maybe they're just working names?
    Yeah, just working names for the most part while I'm working out cultures and such. Thanks for the compliments, they mean a lot.

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