These experimental/casual mapping threads are becoming quite popular. I think they're great.

I think your islands of Paloket drawing is very good. The water, grassland and cities are very good. The mountains are well-drawn, but my only criticism is that they do not look rugged enough. The sides seem too smooth, and the ridge along the top too even.

On Tol'imen, I think the mountains on Der'imen are the best you've done, but still need work. I also think the hills and forests are very well done on that island. The knockout feature, though, in my opinion, is the plateau feature near Algena. I also really like the perspective, with the inclusion of sky above.

Overall, it is all really good, and I am keen to see more of your experiments here in the future.

THW