(Almost) Finished map of Northern Aruv

[RigoIII]

Changed the land a bit, added rivers (feedback needed again of course), fixed up the bottom mountains.

[RigoIII]

Here's ALMOST the final result. Labeling and other such little details left and changes to what I have now if people think it'll make it better. So here it is if you didn't see it int the first post:

[RigoIII]

Ah it feels good to be back to the Guild! After about a month of almost inactivity (I did get little work done but hadn't posted it), I'm also working on another city (no I did not finish Moonfall yet, I like putting off stuff and jumping on to other projects... it's a sickness but what can I do...), here is the still almost finished map of Northern Aruv. I need to fix up the labeling, the borders in the south and the road (suggestions as always are welcomed!).

[Josiah VE]

Looking nice so far. I think I like it better without the coloured forests, not sure that the colour suits it.

[snodsy]

The brown forest and ocean too close in color to distinguish them apart. May just a tint of green, not as much as before? Nice job though on the map

[RigoIII]

I added a little blue to the oceans and very little green to the forests.

[Warlin]

Nice job so far. The variation of color in the forest are well done.

[ChickPea]

Looking good. Agree that the forests are very nice and the mountains really lift off the page, err, screen! Not sure, but I wonder if the seas might look better with just a touch more blue in them? (Might just be my personal taste, though).

Something you might want to take a look at is the colour of your rivers in comparison to your roads. With a quick glance, I thought your roads were rivers, as they're about the right colour for water and they wiggle around a lot like rivers do. It was only when peering closer, I realised what they were meant to be. Your rivers get a little lost in the background now, as they're very similar to the forests. Not sure if these parts are finished or still to be worked on, but I think it'd be worth taking a look.

[RigoIII]

Fixed in the legend. Now all that's left is the compass, few more labels of islands and lakes, maybe some sea monsters and customizing the border.

[RigoIII]

Something you might want to take a look at is the colour of your rivers in comparison to your roads. With a quick glance, I thought your roads were rivers, as they're about the right colour for water and they wiggle around a lot like rivers do. It was only when peering closer, I realised what they were meant to be. Your rivers get a little lost in the background now, as they're very similar to the forests. Not sure if these parts are finished or still to be worked on, but I think it'd be worth taking a look.

Yup I'm still trying to find the right color for them... I think that I could just switch them and they'd look better, roads become dirt roads and rivers are... well just rivers!


UPDATE:
Changed the river and road colors but I'm still not sure... I might completely remove the roads, I'll think about that.