The 2nd one, the colored one, with the locations enhanced in the margins....AWESOME!
Too few good maps of Beleriand exist. Placement of some locations in Beleriand is challenging, as there were two maps made by Christopher Tolkien and as you pointed out Angband is not on either of them.

The pictures/close ups, in the margins, I noticed the Star of Feanor on all the locations associated with the Feanorians, nice touch. I can't make out the symbol for Finrod.

Sirielle, didn't you do a map of Gondolin City too? You should post that here, the detail was phenomenal.
I loved your depiction of Gar Ainion.

Fantastic work!