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    Default City of Larania

    City map for my personal campaign. Larania is a flourishing trade hub and specializes in bronze working thanks to the copper-rich mountains nearby. The many rich noble houses are planning a revolution from the Kingdom of Moorway due to heavy taxation. The players, who work for the queen of Moorway have to root out rebels with either subterfuge or brute force.

    I'm not too sure if I should call this a WIP or not, but my lack of artistic skill tells me this is as good as its going to get for now
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    It's a nice, clear, and readable map. Not all of the roof slopes on the map are shaded so that might be something worth doing.
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    Yeah, the direction the sun is shining from made it so that both sides of some roofs got the same amount of light. I kinda just lightly shaded some of those roofs and its kinda hard to see. Thanks for the feedback, though

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    Fixed some incorrect labels
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    I like the color scheme for your legend and districts - it gives a good feel for the town. Why is the Duchess's castle not part of the Noble District?

    Very nice shading on the woods (#10), too.

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    Thanks for the feedback! There isn't much of a reason for the castle not being in the noble district. I guess I wanted it to be unique, I might change it later

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