[WIP] First Map: Tomb of the Crimson King...Feedback?

[TavernMage]

This is my first map - imitating Dyson Logos style.

Everything is original except the rocky part of the cliff which is from a Dyson Logos map.

Any feedback would be great. Particularly what sticks out that looks like it needs work. (Having fresh eyes is great - but not always easy to keep.)

Medium resolution version:


Super high resolution (not recommended):


We have started to try to colorize it.



One piece of feedback we received is that the Tomb appears to be "floating." They suggested we add something to show more clearly that the Tomb is "embedded."

What do you think? Does it need that? Other thoughts?

Thanks!

[Snorre]

Incredible map! Isometric maps is my weakness =)

[Bogie]

Nice work, I got a chuckle when I saw the pit trap with a ladder and a door out.

[MistyBeee]

One piece of feedback we received is that the Tomb appears to be "floating." They suggested we add something to show more clearly that the Tomb is "embedded."
What do you think? Does it need that? Other thoughts?
Thanks!

One thing you could try is to just suggest walls with a discreet bricks or rocky texture : it doesn't need much to just give the idea, but honestly I don't think it's necessary : it's not floating for me ^^
And great job, TavernMage ! I especially love the bottom part, with the sand getting lost in the grid... lovely !

[TavernMage]

Thanks MistyBee - that sand getting lost in the grid was our favorite part too. We felt lucky stumbling on a way to draw it that seemed to work okay.