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    Post Tempa's District West - Critique

    Hi everyone,

    I'm really excited to post here for a critique of my first map. Please let me know your feedback, especially on the borders and labels.

    Tempa is a secondary fantasy world in the Pacific ocean, which exists concealed at the beginning of 19th Century, but travel technology is making that harder.

    Thanks!
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    Neat setting idea. The roads look quite good. I have trouble reading the font for the legend though, especially at a smaller size. I'd switch to a less stylized font for the practical bits, and keep it for the splash logo.

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