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    Default September 2018 Challenge: Purgatorio

    Hi all, I said a little thoughtlessly that I will be in, so I'm in
    While tidying up my library, I bumped into The Divine Comedy and realized that I had never gone beyond Purgatorio but that game me an idea. I will try to make a map of Mount Purgatory as Dante imagined it, in a top-down view, which is probably not the easiest way to represent successive elevations, but I want to do it that way
    Each part of the spiral represents a terrace, the first being the Ante-Purgatory. I have to add stairs between terraces. The Earthly paradise will be in the center on the green space.
    It's not strictly a map of a paradise but certainly a stairway to Heaven !
    My first doubt obviously concerns the elevation of the mountain. Is it visible or does it look like a hollow ?
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    Dante? Oh yeah !!!
    Maybe more stronger shadows for the mountains? It seems fine on the builded part, at least for me.

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    I wondered when someone would do a Dante map for this challenge! Nice!i like your textures.

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    Thanks !
    Some stairs (actually I hate stairs) and some work on the Earthly paradise... Hum, it is going very classic, I'll have to refrain myself from putting a big evil snake somewhere... Added Enoe and Lethe rivers meeting together (call the river police !)
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    Nice work so far, and I think the river police will excuse you. This time!!!
    "We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of dreams"

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    Great entry! Your stairs are really well done, I like that they appear to be carved into the stone.

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    I can't find the time to work more on this map and I am a bit stuck on it, so... some work on the border
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    Changed my mind about the border, added some text and a compass rose...
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    The way you textured the font is very effective, and I love the feeling of movement in the river.

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    Thanks, I was wondering if they were visible enough.
    Second part of the labels and the title, I adjusted some shadows and added a little greenery on the island... and I almost missed the Hell's exit cave
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