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Thread: November 2018 Challenge: The Charge of Sir Arthur Bryne

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    Thanks, MistyBeee! I wasn't sure I'd be able to achieve on paper (well, "paper") what I saw in my mind, but I think I'm getting there.

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    Lots done, lots still to do!

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    I just finished reading the poem/song as you updated. I think it's great - really adds a lot of character to the world and it explains things like the charges on the coat of arms. And the map looks great - you could go for a more desaturated colour for the northern sea if you wanted to make it feel more frigid.

    The text in the latest update seems - or at least feels a little squashed horizontally. It might be worth increasing the tracking of the text.
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    Thanks, Larb! I'm glad you like the story - I picture it being sung in taverns all over the north (where Brynehall is located). You're right about both the frigid sea and the text and I'm working on those. For the text I was trying to be a bit lazy and not have to write out each line as a separate layer.

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    Desaturated the north sea per Larb's suggestion - definitely looks better. Hopefully the text is fixed now.

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    Fixed some stuff and added labels. I still need to add shading for the city/town/village icons and correct any mistakes I find but otherwise I think it's pretty much done!

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    This is starting to look nicely polished! I love that Nessie seems to have made an appearance

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gidde View Post
    This is starting to look nicely polished! I love that Nessie seems to have made an appearance
    Yes, I was about to put in a standard sea serpent but Nessie asked to swim the waters of Crescent Bay.

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    Haha, you can't keep a good sea monster down!

    The map looks fab, aeshnidae!
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    Quote Originally Posted by ChickPea View Post
    Haha, you can't keep a good sea monster down!

    The map looks fab, aeshnidae!
    Hee hee! Thanks, ChickPea!

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