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    Map Arcy, capital of Valdosia

    Here is the completed map(s) of Arcy (faux-Paris), capital of Valdosia (faux-France), in a time-period corresponding to the second half of the 16th century. Some 180,000 people inhabit the city (including faubourgs), and the walls encompass c/a 340 ha/840 ac (this includes the islands).

    Disclaimer: I don't speak a word of French, so if I inadvertently insulted someone's pet or eating habits with my toponyms, I apologize in advance.

    Made in Photoshop (with the exception of the details in the coats-of-arms).

    --EDIT: I corrected the language errors and re-uploaded the maps. Thank you for the help, Misty!

    Sort of WIP thread.

    Main map
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    Military map
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    Law and order map
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    Wealth distribution map
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    Last edited by Lars; 03-20-2019 at 04:27 AM. Reason: Language errors corrected

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    Wow, Lars, you've done a great job with this! I especially love the added details of the wealth, crime and military maps. Repped

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    Such a nice work and a beautiful mapS ! congratulations !

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    I like this -- it's very clean. The black marked churches makes them pop out -- as they would in pre-revolutionary France.... love it!

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    I always enjoy a city map, and this one worth to be seen !

    At a first view, your French names looks good, but here are a few corrections if you need them :
    - I would add a E to "Sainte" for feminine names like "Sainte Louise" or "Sainte Amatilda".
    - "Garde de l'Exarque" and not "Garde du Exarque",
    - ú does not exist in French, so "Corude" or maybe "Corûde" would probably be better
    - If you want a French title, the translation would be "Arcy - Résidence Royale et Capitale de Valdosia".

    I also wonder what's the "F." for (like "F. l'Abbaye") ?

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    Very well planned and executed. Great work!

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wingshaw View Post
    Wow, Lars, you've done a great job with this! I especially love the added details of the wealth, crime and military maps. Repped

    Wingshaw
    Quote Originally Posted by - JO - View Post
    Such a nice work and a beautiful mapS ! congratulations !
    Quote Originally Posted by Sulla View Post
    I like this -- it's very clean. The black marked churches makes them pop out -- as they would in pre-revolutionary France.... love it!
    Thank you for the kind words, it's always encouraging to hear such praise!

    Quote Originally Posted by MistyBeee View Post
    I always enjoy a city map, and this one worth to be seen !

    At a first view, your French names looks good, but here are a few corrections if you need them :
    - I would add a E to "Sainte" for feminine names like "Sainte Louise" or "Sainte Amatilda".
    - "Garde de l'Exarque" and not "Garde du Exarque",
    - ú does not exist in French, so "Corude" or maybe "Corûde" would probably be better
    - If you want a French title, the translation would be "Arcy - Résidence Royale et Capitale de Valdosia".

    I also wonder what's the "F." for (like "F. l'Abbaye") ?
    Thank you for taking the time to correct my Google-translate French, it is very much appreciated! The F's are supposed to be short for 'Faubourg', as in suburb in Old French. Thinking about it, I should probably have left it out, since they aren't actually named Faubourg XYZ, it's simply a description of what they are. But that is obvious from the map and therefore redundant.

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    Quote Originally Posted by arsheesh View Post
    Very well planned and executed. Great work!

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh
    Oh, I got ninja'd as I was writing. Thank you for the kind comment!

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    This came out very well Lars!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lars View Post
    Thank you for taking the time to correct my Google-translate French, it is very much appreciated! The F's are supposed to be short for 'Faubourg', as in suburb in Old French. Thinking about it, I should probably have left it out, since they aren't actually named Faubourg XYZ, it's simply a description of what they are. But that is obvious from the map and therefore redundant.
    You're welcome !
    If you want to keep them, "Fg." is the correct abbreviation

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