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    Excellent! I'm glad to see someone else using this tutorial!
    Guillaume Tavernier's work is really beautiful and what you do with it is excellent!
    If I may make one very small remark: I would avoid drawing the wall in transparency. I think you don't need it: we fully understand that there is a wall in front of us.
    Did you try to just draw the door frames? Maybe that's enough (if doors are important).
    That's only my opinion, but I find that the transparent wall spoils the beauty of your drawing a little.

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    Thanks JO, that's a useful tip indeed!

    I dropped the semitransparent wall but kept the doorframes as you suggested. Then I started working in the top-down plans for the different levels of the dungeon (looking a bit beyond the cut-offs in the ISO version to get a better idea of the structure of the place).

    I still need to add a legend in the right column, but this is nearing completion!

    I'm still torn between two versions for the plans. One where I just draw the level itself, and a white void where it opens up to lower levels, and one where the lower levels are drawn as well, but darkened to set them apart.

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    Which do you guys feel works best?
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    Alright people, I finished the map, and published it here! Thanks for your feedback!
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