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    Wip Virasana Empire - Mandala Web Jumproute Map

    Hello everyone,

    I have created this map as a personal reference for the Virasana Empire novel series my wife and I are writing.
    It is a work in progress, and I would love to hear from the community how to improve on the design.

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    Some of the goals for this map were:
    • easy readability (ideally even in B/W , but definitely not there yet)
    • easy to understand, useable as quick reference
    • clear style that could hang in every classroom or spaceport, or maybe laminated in a spaceship's cockpit

    Any feedback is welcome, and if you have any questions, please ask!

    Thanks so much in advance,
    Osiris

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    I really like it. Reminds me of the maps of the London Underground. Not sure if the intent will end up being to look like an actual hang-in-every-spaceport map or "just" for reference in the novel but if it's supposed to look like an official map then you might want to find a way to have some "government-speak" on it. Regardless, I think it looks awesome

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    Thank you!
    It did start as a mere reference, but it's becoming more. So yes, adding more government speak is a great idea.

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