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Thread: July/Aug '19 Lite Challenge: Unknown Island

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    Wip July/Aug '19 Lite Challenge: Crystal Island

    Hi Everyone,

    I'm new here... I've not made many maps but thought what better way to practice and join the community than to join in a lite challenge.
    Deadlines seem to have a good effect on forcing me to finish things.

    Still very new to all this so feel free to critique with no sugar coating... I don't take sugar with my coffee and I don't particularly enjoy it in critiques either.

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    I've got the basics in, mountains, rivers, roads. Will look at trees and maybe buildings, will also need to think of a name.. I should probably think up a back story to make populating the island with buildings easier / cohesive.

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    Welcome aboard, Pomb !
    You have a very nice relief here and I look forward to see the next steps

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    Those are some pretty nice mountains!
    „The Road goes ever on and on
    Down from the door where it began
    Now far ahead the Road has gone
    And I must follow if I can“

    – Bilbo Baggins

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    Nice job! I'm in agreement with the others, I love those mountains too!

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    You've created quite the perspective here ! Great job !

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    @MistyBeee Thank you, I've taken a lot of 'inspiration' from your maps!
    I'm not sure that my geography makes much sense, but it's been fun.

    @vanScoota I like them too, but they much like all the other line work I think feels slightly sloppy, I've noticed that I can make much nicer marks with a pencil or pen than in Photoshop.

    @RedKellBell Thank you.

    @TomasR Thank you, I'm not sure what I'm doing

    I went through a couple different things trying with buildings and farm details, but didn't like the scaling compared to the map size. So ended up removing them and just made town dots.
    It still feels a little bare to me, so thinking of adding some pull outs for specific details.

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    Kudos to you for entering the lite challenge whilst still in the moderated comments stage. Very nice map too I hope it does well with the voting !

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    Welcome to the Challenge Pomb! I agree with the others, your mountains are great. The one thing I would critique is I am not a fan of the shoreline, it seems to wide or needs something else like lines or texture.

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    Great first challenge map, and it's awesome to see another member for South Africa.

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