Temaris WIP

[Manosman]

A new map! What do you think?

[Gala]

I quite like how bright the ocean is. What effect did you use for it?

But it thins that Delta Sea and the other are awkwardly placed and slanted. You have so much space around the land that they could either be enlarge and more stylized or that the land could be bigger.

It looks great though

[Manosman]

So, you say that there's too much sea, where it could be some land or something?

[Manosman]

So, I checked out that thing about the sea. I don't plant to make the land bigger, because that's the style I was going for right from the start. However, I do notice the problem that these waters should be one sea. I think it's better now.

[Gala]

So sorry I haven't logged back on in a while.

I didn't mean increase the area of land. I don't know what you're using to create this, but it might be possible to make the area of land take up a bigger percentage of the page than it already is.

Like I said, I really like the whatever you did with the ocean, but it takes up a lot for space for something that doesn't convey any info.

Only my 2 cents. It still is a good map.

[Manosman]

Yes, I understand. Since I've already uploaded this one, I'll have it in mind for the next maps I'll be making.