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Thread: Sep/Oct 2019 Lite Challenge Entry: Smokelands

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    Looks great! I love the way you've depicted the clouds.

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    Nice - this one would make a terrific frontspiece for a novel. The perspective works really well.

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    Thanks Falconius, the clouds are my favorite feature too.

    Thank you Tiana.

    Thanks Chashio!

    Cool thanks for the suggestion ThomasR.

    Thanks Lyandra! I'm learning with each map, I like drawing mountains and clouds the most!

    Thanks jshoer, now we just need someone to contact me for a cover

    Not many changes here, I tried making some line weight changes to make the map read a little clearer.

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    Yeah, the mountains & clouds are your best work, but everything else is well done too.

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    Beautiful! Although I've come to expect as much from you by now

    I think the composition works well, and adding the stronger contrast was a good call. Makes the mountains and especially the volcano really pop. I for one would love to see how this would look in color, even if I do agree with my Guildmates that it already looks wonderful in b/w.
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    Great entry. Those clouds surrounding the mountains are great.

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