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    Wip The Ocean's Mouth Archipelago Map Project

    Hello Everyone,

    I am currently doing this map and I wanted to share the map-making process, I have seen a lot of people doing it on here and it seems to be very beneficial and educational to involve other talented cartographers on personal projects, so, I thought I would give it a go as well.

    Any feedback is appreciated and actually welcomed, especially regarding the coast style which I am not entirely sure about!

    Bear in mind this map is very early doors and a work in progress.

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    Hello !
    Interesting map !
    Personaly, I find the coast line a bit broad... maybe thinner would be better ?
    Maybe too the waves could be more accentuated, more present ?
    And in my opinion, something is missing around those mountains (maybe you planned to draw forest and sand like the one in the right ?)
    But you are on a good path here ! It’s promising !!
    Keep up the good job !

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