Feb/Mar '20 Lite Challenge: Derelict Undersea Dome

[LindaJeanne]

Yeah, I had turned the opacity of the grid layer down to 50% almost immediately after I posted, but it could probably use further "backgrounding". (I have it hidden mot of the time when I'm working, because it slows things down, so its gotten less scrutiny than it probably should.)

[LindaJeanne]

Alright, a bit more progress:

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[LindaJeanne]

Some things obviously still need refinement, but here's the latest update:

Thoughts and advice (especially wrt the labeling) welcome!

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(Font is http://www.fontriver.com/font/bluesquare/)

[LindaJeanne]

...And this time with the grid properly turned on. Gah.

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[Styescape]

I like the outcome and especially the idea and its possibilities for great stories... have some in mind already

[TimetoDraw]

Mission lead "Guys, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess that the blood dragged smears are a bad sign."

Give just a wee bit more attention to the labels, so there's a bit of space around the text and label border. Or perhaps a thicker border like the body labels. Great looking map :-)

[LindaJeanne]

A few tweaks:

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[rdanhenry]

I guess it is pretty predictable that I'd start my comments with a bit of copy editing, but you misspelled "deceased".

As far as the map itself goes, it seems clear enough and has an interesting setup if (when) things turn tactical. Given the inclusion of the blood smears, I would suggest some visual indication that the broken tanks are broken (water on the floor, maybe some glass?). Also, maybe some toilets.

[LindaJeanne]

you misspelled "deceased".

I, um, just meant that they had been taken out of their cases! Decased!

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I'm on the fence about the blood smears. On the one hand, they're kind of out-of-place because they rest of the map is more "stylized". On the other hand, they provide information that would be lost if I remove them.

[Eowyn Cwper]

I love the enigmatic thrillery scenario.