WIP Rime Fortress from Kobold Press's Journeys to the West

[BaldAccountant]

I need a pentagonal green fortress for this adventure. So today I learned how to colorize. Here is WIP so far Who knew there was so much geometry involved in non square castles

[BaldAccountant]

Here is te updated first floor - should I do a moat? If so, what is the best way for a non artistic person like me to do that?

[Bindusara]

a moat seems a good idea.
Why have you done 2 doors? It's a small forteress, there is no reason adding a week point.
The gate seems not large enough : less than 2m, it's impossible entering with a cart

The vertex of your pentagon are week points : there is no way defending it if someone start digging just there. The battlement is huge, soldiers can't throw things or use arrows there.

Hope it will help ... of course it's just for an adventure, so don't bother with my "realistics" toughts ;-)

[BaldAccountant]

Here is updated 1st floor and 2nd floor Stairs are a little off, but my players hopefully won't notice