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    I also think a blank interior is probably fine, as it allows for more diversity of use by potential players. One thing I feel is missing though is some details around the camp tents. Like, I feel like a small fire, a couple of barrels with spears sticking out the top, and things of that nature would make it feel more "lived-in". As it is now, the camp area seems a bit sparse to me, and I think some little details to show what the expeditionary force is like would be interesting. Just a thought though. At any rate, what you've got so far is super sharp!


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    Phew, this was a tight call. I wanted to polish quite a few things, but I didn't look at the time. So I am glad I got to post my final version before the end of the challenge.

    Hope you enjoy!

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    Though I am wondering if the file size is okay, it's like 8Mb. It doesn't bother does it?
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    If it let you post it then it is OK.

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    Congrats on a great map!!

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