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    It is looking absolutely wonderful Jo!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    It's looking great!
    I'm just admiring you working on it, waiting for the cities, villages and the famous bridge .
    Thanks ! Glad you like it (well, that’s the purpose of this challenge, after all !)

    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    It is looking absolutely wonderful Jo!
    Thanks a lot Bogie ! Encouragement welcome !

    I needed a break from inking, so I tried a bit of colouring... I try to stay in the palette of Ilanthar... it’s not so easy to mimic it’s style.

    @Ilanthar : I hope you’ll agree with this choice of color ? Or do you want something more « plain colors » ?

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    I do agree with your palette !

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    I do agree with your palette !
    Ok ! Thanks ... I'll add some nuances and relief

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    Speaking of scale... what do you think about that bridge ?

    I know it’s small regarding the whole map, but it’s already too big regarding the trees...
    Any preferences ?

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    The bridge in itself is great (and the type of bridge coherent with landscape) and I woulnd't mind the scale. It's more than obvious than this is the only obvious way to cross the river, and that is the essential point .
    Maybe it would pop more if it is place on a straight portion of the river though... but never mind, it's probably be more obvious when you'll add shading & shadows.

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    My suggestion on the bridge would be (if possible) to slide the bridge a millimeter or two to the left so that the midpoint is over water instead of the edge of the river.

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    Sorry for this meaningful post, but I have to try to post my map in a different resolution.
    Up to now, I've worked and posted from Procreate on my Ipad, but I realise that, even when zoomed in, my map shows no details...
    I must be doing something wrong, so I try to post it as the best .jpg possible from photoshop on my computer.

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    edit : it seems to me, that it looks better, isnt'it ?
    I guess the compression to obtain a .jpg on procreate is too strong...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    My suggestion on the bridge would be (if possible) to slide the bridge a millimeter or two to the left so that the midpoint is over water instead of the edge of the river.
    Your are right ! Thanks for the good advice ! Fellowing what Ilanthar says, I think I'll redo the bridge a bit different, and I'll pay at the position of the middle of the bridge

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    The bridge in itself is great (and the type of bridge coherent with landscape) and I woulnd't mind the scale. It's more than obvious than this is the only obvious way to cross the river, and that is the essential point .
    Maybe it would pop more if it is place on a straight portion of the river though... but never mind, it's probably be more obvious when you'll add shading & shadows.
    I'm glad you like the type and that the scale is OK for you (cause I couldn't draw it smaller... I'm already at this point in drawing, where my brush is 1 pixel ... )

    I'll find a way for that bridge to pop more... I might divert the river canyon a bit (ah ! The power of the drawer ! do we all have god-complex ?)

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