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Thread: February 2022 Challenge: Trezu Remastered

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    I agree, the labels are hard to read. I think it's the outlines' fault. Remove outlines or, if you added them because text looked too thin, just match the colour to the text. Also I believe it'd look more natural if the background where the lava pool is was black or grey, as if burned.

    Overall everything else looks cool: the border, line work, compass.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kisachik the Wanderer View Post
    I agree, the labels are hard to read. I think it's the outlines' fault. Remove outlines or, if you added them because text looked too thin, just match the colour to the text. Also I believe it'd look more natural if the background where the lava pool is was black or grey, as if burned.

    Overall everything else looks cool: the border, line work, compass.
    Thanks Kisachik, I realise the outline for the text was getting glitchy because of the width I'd set it too. I've updated it to be a bit thicker alongside using a thicker variation of the font. I think both help, thanks! Also, I changed the lava area to be greyer and agree it looks better.

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    That definitely helped the labels. And the volcano looks more threatening and real with nearby land turned to ash.
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