【Kagarihara Prefecture】Introducing the commission illustration 【篝原県】

[qhqhTerra]

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Ladies and gentlemen, it's been a long time. My name is Takutaku.
It's been a few years since I posted.

I would like to introduce you to the project I was in charge of.
This map is a map of a fictitious prefecture, "Kagarihara", in a fictitious world resembling the Japanese archipelago.

I drew a modern map.
You can see my illustrations on pixiv.

【宣伝】篝原県および館津県全域地形図 | タクタク･テラ #pixiv https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/103789777

Comments and advice are welcome!
Ah, I use automatic translation, so I would appreciate it if you could comment in simple English.


みなさま、お久しぶりです。私の名前はタクタクです。
数年ぶりの投稿です。

私が担当したプロジェクトをあなたに紹介します。
この地図は、日本列島に似ている架空の世界における、架空の県、"カガリハラ"の地図です。

私は現代のような地図を描きました。
あなたは、pixivで私のイラストを見ることができます。

コメントやアドバイスを歓迎します！
あっ、私は自動翻訳を使っているので、シンプルな英文でコメントしてくれると嬉しいです。

[HINDSIGHT]

Looks good. Top part might be my favourite. Maybe the thick rivers could be a bit thinner and some islands are a bit square. The greene towards the coast is a bit intense when there is a lot of it, but it works at the top part of the map. I would also add more underwater elevation lines. Good work.

[qhqhTerra]

Looks good. Top part might be my favourite. Maybe the thick rivers could be a bit thinner and some islands are a bit square. The greene towards the coast is a bit intense when there is a lot of it, but it works at the top part of the map. I would also add more underwater elevation lines. Good work.

Thanks for commenting here too!　
After all, it is difficult to depict the lowlands in a graduated coloring diagram ......
About the underwater, this area has a flat seabed. Thank you HINDSIGHT san!