Virasana Empire - Map of Disari

[epson]

I think it looks good and the style does not necessarily need more details.
Experimenting with what Tiana said is obviously worth a try though.

If you ever open the map again you could make "and coastal" align with the top of "Disari".
I would also try to make the grey outline a lot thinner, but that is just me not liking big outlines for frames.

[Brackhaus]

Thank you so much for your input, didn't notice the header was misaligned! But really happy you already like it as is.

Yup, I can see how the gray outline can be divisive. But we usually have these maps printed out and laminated on our gaming table amidst a sea of other papers, so the stark outline helps it to stick out. So I find it useful, but as I said,