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    I have been sick for a while and slacking on my map making.

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    Lovely work! I really love the style, looks so much like a map of a historical place.
    The mountains seem a bit simplistic compared to the rest of the piece, but I guess they are more of a symbolic representation of the terrain outside of the city?

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    I love the "3D feel" of this map ! At first, I thought it was made with Sketchup or another of these software... but no, it's just your skill ! Congratulations ! It's really impressive and immersive ! (I do agree with Josiah about the mountains, though)

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    Lovely work! The perspective on the buildings is really impressively made, it looks very accurate and makes for a really clear and readable layout. The overall colours are maybe a tad bland for my taste, there isn't really anything that makes the design pop or draws your gaze in. I don't know, it kind of has a slightly unfinished feeling to me? Maybe some labels or a title and/or frame would help it feel less so.

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    That's one hell of a city with a very consistent perspective. Kudos for that. Not a fan of the clash of style between inside the walls and outside though. I feel the city part is soo good, it would have deserved a bit more. But don't get me wrong, that's an awesome city you have here.

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    Thank you so much for all your kind words and wonderful feedback. I made some quick changes and turned on the existing legend. I hope you enjoy it and feedback is welcomed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by limon View Post
    Thank you so much for all your kind words and wonderful feedback. I made some quick changes and turned on the existing legend. I hope you enjoy it and feedback is welcomed.

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    Really nice! I like the news mountains so much more. It really makes the map a lot more cohesive.

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    Very nice work! And that second version is even better.

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    The second version is a nice improvement. Great job!
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