Quote Originally Posted by silverhead View Post
- The mountains: how could I improve them? They don't look so terrible if zoomed out, but in the detailed picture you'll see that they are not very good. I hope it's just a question of practice, but I'd like to know any mistakes I made so I don't repeat them.
- I don't really like how rivers look. In my previous attempt I drew first the rivers and then the mountains, and I think they looked better. Maybe it's the "fake 3D" look of the mountains, that invites to draw rivers in the same fashion instead of purely "from above". Sorry if I don't make myself well understood. Anyway, what would you change?

I include a general view of the map and a detailed, smaller fragment. Thanks in advance.
There are several hand drawn mountain tutorials and, if I may say so, I think the one I did might suite your map quite well, though you might want to stick to just black and grey depending on if you plan to add any additional color to the map or not.

Rivers look fine to me...