Mistwick Marshes - Swamp Region

[anomiecoalition]

Hey all,

Working on a new campaign set in a dismal swampland. Pretty happy with the results so far, but would love to get some feedback on how to improve it. I'm still struggling with figuring out how best to do the labeling. And pretty sure i likely broke a million rules on rivers (but its a swamp, so who knows)

Mistwick Marshes_small.jpg

[Chick]

That's a very impressive looking swamp! The label you have looks great, what concerns you about the labeling?

[anomiecoalition]

Thanks - I suppose I'm just trying to figure out if the style/color/size, etc is going to be clear. Here's another version with a few more names thrown in.

Mistwick Marshes_small.jpg

[Chick]

Those names are quite easy to read, even with the very busy background. If you want more, throw in a little tiny bit (more?) dark shadow under the letters, but I'm not sure it even needs that.