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    Default Oominor (Commission WIP)

    Hey guys, here's another commission in the works. The goal is a really bright, vibrant, Caribbean style fantasy world.
    Here's a snapshot of the progress, let me know if you have any feedback or constructive criticism!

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    This is really nice, I dont know if that forests are finished but i hope they are, they are total focal point for me because they look really unconvensional. Great Job.

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    Thanks! Forests aren't actually done, still playing around with the shading and some are missing shading. I am trying to go for different looking style as it is supposed to be an unworldy jungle

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    The saturated feel looks great, I'm always amazed by your ocean shading, bravo!

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    Already looks magnificent. Forests, grassland and desert have really nice feel to it.
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    I love how you have stark color transitions and manage to make them work perfectly. I envy you as it is something I still cannot achieve on my maps. Great job Josiah !

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    Hey guys, looking for feedback again!
    I've done a bit of work on this map, adding some dramatic landscapes such as the burning fields and volcanoes.

    I'm not totally sold on the forests, I'm looking for feedback on that. What do you guys think?
    Any criticism/suggestions for other parts of the map are also welcome!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adfor View Post
    The saturated feel looks great, I'm always amazed by your ocean shading, bravo!

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    Thanks so much Adfor! I use a base multiply layer of blue with a few overlay layers on top using a big black/white grungy brush.

    Quote Originally Posted by Voolf View Post
    Already looks magnificent. Forests, grassland and desert have really nice feel to it.
    Thanks so much Voolf!

    Quote Originally Posted by ThomasR View Post
    I love how you have stark color transitions and manage to make them work perfectly. I envy you as it is something I still cannot achieve on my maps. Great job Josiah !
    I beg to differ! I've seen some of your more colorful maps before

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    Looking gorgeous! Two details bother me a little: first off, don't your volcanoes need craters? It looks to me like they're crying lava somewhat! Also the rivers flowing through the dunes seem a bit off, especially since I've never seen a river running through an unambiguous sand desert like that. Maybe I'm misguided though!
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    Looks really nice

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