Mayet Islands WIP

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This style is getting smoother. Good job.

There are some coastal areas that still looks a tad odd, if I have to nitpick. The South Eastern coast of the main land has an area that I wouldn't know that would form naturally. Same with the Northern Coast on Kenpei island.
Secondly, I feel making the text either darker, or lighter with a dark edge would make it stand out a bit better. As it is, it is somewhat hard to read at places. Try experimenting with a single label in your forest and see if you can make it more legible and THEN you go about making the rest uniform.

Another small thing, the river going out of Growth Lake seems odd with it starting super thin and then ending that broad at the sea. Same with Minus Pond(?). A bit less extreme on the thin side would probably help.

Still, that is all nitpicking on finer details. So, I feel you are make good strides forward.

I would like to see you tweak those things on this map. It would be nice to see.


P.S. Dissaster Mountains, unless you planned on spelling it that way. Disaster doesn't have two S's after the 'i'.
The reason I underlined pond in Minus Pond, is number one, Tiny Lake is bigger than it and it is actually a lake on your map. A pond is much much much smaller than a lake.