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    Guild Member Gadiouka's Avatar
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    I've been silent for a while because INKSCAPE, that's why !!! This software drove me nuts, but I wanted to have clean text and border, so...
    Here's the result. I struggled to find the right style and colors for this little duo, the main problem being that the two maps have their own palette, so I had to find something that would match both... I'm still not sure about that beige though. I might keep it, or try a light green.

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    I think the frame is a bit too much for the beautiful illustrations. it buries them, sort of. Then the frame itself is really beautiful. I like the Art Deco Style.
    The typeface for the dino description is different from the others. If it is meant to be, just ignore.

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    Thanks for your feedback Levtrona! You're right, the frame probably takes too much space... maybe I'll lighten it a bit so that it doesn't catch the eye too much? I spent too much time on it to throw it away haha And well spotted for the typo, that's indeed a small mistake I'll have to correct

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    Soooo, I figured I couldn't keep it that way... a friend of mine suggested yesterday that I try a B&W version of the whole thing. So I made one, and I kind of like the general feeling it gives to the map and the frame. But I still wanted to keep my color version because, damn, I work too hard on those colors So I made a second version, lighter and simpler.

    MARAIS FINI NB bis.png

    Dyptique simplifié5.png

    I the end, I think the last one is my favorite. Thank you again Levtrona for your advice!

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    the last one is great.

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