My first attempts

[Steel General]

Not to bad so far, one thing I noticed is the shadows are inconsistent - the chests have them, most other things don't.

[forgedchaos]

Thanks for pointing that out I didnt even see that. not working with shadows yet. I just mostly pasted different peices together for this and didnt see the shadows on the chests. Will remember that in the future.

Forgedchaos

[Redrobes]

I reckon with a better floor texture it would jump out better. Have a look on cgtextures.com or similar site and see if there is some flagstones or something that you could replace the floor with. At mo its pretty pale that the scene lacks atmosphere. Thanks for sharing.