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    Map Isle of Shab Ra-tan

    I started this over in an experiment thread some weeks ago along with several other maps when I was just starting to try out doing landscapes in perspective. http://www.cartographersguild.com/sh...ad.php?t=29817
    There was to be a story to go along with it, and there is, sort of, but I have not had time to write it all out.
    As it had been a while I realized I had not posted it in finished maps so I am today.
    I was wanting to make an adventure with several maps for this and hopefully I will when time allows.

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    Last edited by J.Edward; 05-14-2015 at 03:25 PM.

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    Great map. Loved the perspective!

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    Excellent work J.! The only (very minor) nitpick I would have is the yellowish glow around a couple of labels that don't make them that much legible.
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    I love the clouds and the title font. I do agree the orange glow around two of the labels could maybe do with being a bit brighter.

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    Awesome! I want to be there!
    "That sounds... incredibly complicated, but there's no doubt the result is fantastic." /Diamond

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    It's nice to see the finished product. Very well done sir!

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh

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    Thanks Mateus.
    Max and Sarithus - thanks. I'll have a look at it.
    Sometimes I change the glow from screen to overlay to get a better or different effect.
    That may be the case here. I'll see if that can be improved.
    Obbehobbe - Thanks. If I get the story done and added you may change your mind.
    Thank you arsheesh.

    edit - I just changed the glow to stroke and changed the font color.
    I think that is more readable. A bit less exciting but readable.
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    Hmmm, I missed seeing the first one, but this is certainly beautiful!!

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    Nice to see this one again, because it's gorgeous! Can't rep, which is a shame, because this one really deserves it. Fantastic piece of art!

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