Ahhh. I am so bad at this. Can you guys critique this for me so I can get better? I've been following all the tutorials and this just doesn't look right to me but I can't pick out what exactly is wrong. It's like my lines look too "catoonish" or something! Maybe I'm squiggling them a bit too much.

Thanks in advance for any advice anyone can give me

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