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    Here's the town of Umberhaven for my fantasy setting.

    This is a WIP. There is some work left to do. Comments welcome.

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    This little town almost finished. Pretty satisfied with the result so far. Comments welcome.

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    I'm not quite sure of the texture. I like it on the land and it works well there. I'm not quite as certain when it continues over the river too. It feels a little overdone there. Not sure if you can dial it back a little on the water? I really like the overall look of the map though. It's looking great.
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    Looks great! One tiny nitpick, though it's probably just a matter of opinion, the boats look a bit too much like the dock, it's a bit hard to distinguish them when zoomed out. Also too me most of the buildings seem too square, I'm sure it varies from town to town but almost all of these are near square. Besides that I love it!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Josiah VE View Post
    Looks great! One tiny nitpick, though it's probably just a matter of opinion, the boats look a bit too much like the dock, it's a bit hard to distinguish them when zoomed out. Also too me most of the buildings seem too square, I'm sure it varies from town to town but almost all of these are near square. Besides that I love it!
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    Thanks for your comment!
    I kinda agree on the many square buildings but... many buiildings in this town are a bit hastily contructed. Also...some might change a bit as we rework some buildings.

    Hmmm... are the boats too blurry? The docks and boats are from another project... I would probably have to make them in the correct resolution (as they got blurry from the "shrinking")
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    No, no. It's not that they're blurry. I just think you could perhaps make them a bit darker, or just the edge of the boats darker. Right now they're exactly the same texture as the docks. Of course it's something so small it doesn't matter very much.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Josiah VE View Post
    No, no. It's not that they're blurry. I just think you could perhaps make them a bit darker, or just the edge of the boats darker. Right now they're exactly the same texture as the docks. Of course it's something so small it doesn't matter very much.
    Ah... the boats

    Anyway. Made some updates on the finished map (and where you can see the boats in full resolution):
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