Map 13 - Josiah's Land (Name TBA)

[Josiah VE]

I rather like the color version. I'm not experienced enough to give much in way of suggestions, but if I were asked... Those southern mountains seem to be a bit on the small side compared to the plateau. Scale them up a bit?

I prefer the color on the first one, although I'd tone down the sepia a bit maybe? But I think the texture of the second one is better too, although I'm not sure how wip they are. Did you have an idea of what medium this is supposed to be emulating?

Your linework and mountains are amazing though! I love that you can see the shading and detail on the mountains in the color version, another reason it gets my vote.

Thanks for the suggestions you two! I'm going for colour..

SrgDark, I definitely know what you mean, I really should have been thinking about it earlier.. I may or may not make the mountains a bit bigger, depending on time. Thanks for the suggestion!

So here is a bit of an update, putting in cities and stuff.. still a bit messy, but I will tidy it all up in the end.