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    Guild Member FranCobasGC's Avatar
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    Wip WIP Lutraek

    Here´s my first map! it belong to a huge map project that im developing! Maybe i need to change some things in this map (add a decorated frame, a compass card, info about the size of cities, villages...)
    Give me your opinion plz!

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    Hey Fran - welcome to the Guild
    The map looks great - with one exception.
    While the mountains are done well, they are done in perspective while everything else is done as top down.
    Aside from that one issue, this looks wonderful. Has good atmosphere and scale.
    The glow on type might be a bit strong.
    The light house is splendid.

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    Nice! I like this type of city/regional hybrid map, but I think it really shines when there's a lot of villages, farms and suburbs scattered around the main city – this area looks a bit sparsely populated, making it feel empty. You've got some great colors in this one and though I also reacted to the mountain, it's growing on me. It's an interesting look, I think I agree with J.Ed about the glow on the labels.

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    This looks fantastic!! Especially for a first map, amazing job!

    I agree with J. Edward about the mountains..

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    Another very interesting map!

    And another map that should probably be moved to the Town/City Mapping subforum
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