Mouse bookmark 01

[Diamond]

I'm gonna disagree with Vorro and say that I actually do like it with some of the text cut off - it does give the impression of a much larger world beyond.

[Mouse]

I've tried it with the text pulled in, but it doesn't look anywhere near as natural. Its all too squashed up looking.

I think I will leave this one as-is and move onto the next one

[DanielHasenbos]

You've got a nice bookmark there Mouse! And it doesn't even look like a sketch to me! More like a map that need some final touches;p

[Mouse]

Thanks Daniel

For some reason this image is more orange than the original was, so I will probably do another WIP in this one yet.

I would love a bit of critique from a master mapper if you have time. What are the touch-ups you would suggest?

[Mouse]

Love the bold colours. They're very striking.

There's something a bit odd going on with the comments on this thread. This wasn't visible to me until today. Sorry ChickPea - I wasn't deliberately ignoring you!

Thanks for the compliment

[J.Edward]

That one is gonna get used for sure. By me.
Though, you should drop you name on there somewhere.

[Mouse]

Aw thank you John

The name? Oh it was on there, but it got chopped of

Maybe I should go and find it and put it back on. I'll have to do that tomorrow now though. Bit busy today!

[Mouse]

For you, John

I had time after all

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[Ilanthar]

I love this one. The mountains are really well done and those colors are fantastic!

[Mouse]

Aw thank you Ilanthar