Somehow I missed the progress on this one. What a beauty.
I think it probably goes without saying at this point that I am quite fond of your style with these.
It just conveys so well. Such a wonderful feel of the environment.
This one doesn't disappoint.

You may want to consider stroke on some of the text so it reads better.
Like Ri Zhor. But that is small stuff, so not anything that diminishes.
If so, I often use a stroke color similar to the ground.
It's a problem i feel comes up more when you have detailed line work behind text.
One that I deal with a lot.