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    Yeah I agree, a map as nice as this would benefit from that sort of extra detail.
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    Coming along nicely! My esteemed colleagues might be onto something about the balcony railing, though. The added colors already make it appear so much more alive, I really like how this is shaping out. I'll have to start a separate subfolder for Dungeon/Structure maps in my inspiration folder just to have someplace to store yours
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    This is coming along nicely!

    Might I suggest something else? Maybe sketch in the walls as transparent "ghost walls" (sorry, the right words elude me today). It wasn't clear to me that there are supposed to be walls on the individual levels, I only noticed them by looking pretty closely. Maybe my suggestion will make the whole thing too clogged, but it might be worth a try.

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    Excellent suggestions. You're really giving me some good ideas. It's getting close to finish here.
    I had to completely rework the entrance as it didn't match the written description. It's a little visually confusing, the idea is it looks like a wolf's head.

    I think I'll add railing to the balcony next.

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    I love the deep blue tone of the roof and some of the shadows! Just beautiful use of color.
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