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Thread: January 2021 challenge : The premature fall of the city of Karaz Karkom

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    Shadows and lights effects are done... I added a shade on the background.
    I have added the text of the sign that blocks the road to the city gates. As English is not my mother tongue, thank you very much if anyone can point out any errors, grammar mistakes, etc.
    I think I'm more or less finished, but I'm happy to take criticism and comments. I still have time to make corrections or change things.

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    Just amazing! Bravo!

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    Very nice detailed dungeon map.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mapmage View Post
    Just amazing! Bravo!
    Thanks a lot ! Glad you like it !

    Quote Originally Posted by XploringMap View Post
    Very nice detailed dungeon map.
    Thanks! I was wondering if it was detailed enough

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    The shading makes it so alive

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    Quote Originally Posted by XploringMap View Post
    The shading makes it so alive
    Thanks ! The whole style is from Tavernier

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    I fixed some mistakes and added a title... I wonder if it doesn't take too much space over the map (I don't want that the title prevent to see the entrance of the cave behind the waterfall)

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    Why not put the title on the right? Is it because of the legend (not sure what you call that when it's not actually a legend, except in this case I guess it is an actual legend of past occurrences) also being on the right?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Falconius View Post
    Why not put the title on the right? Is it because of the legend (not sure what you call that when it's not actually a legend, except in this case I guess it is an actual legend of past occurrences) also being on the right?
    Exactly... I thought the whole picture was out of balance with both text on the right... don’t you find ?

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    Really great work Jo, this turned out amazing.
    Wonderful use of isometric perspective to give a detailed and layered feeling to this map.
    I have to say I'm a fan of the LOTR dwarves, so all the little details and architecture is really wonderful get lost in. Really love the cliffs too, great use of shading overall to make the perspective look really natural. The lighting in the cavern is also another highlight. And of course the dragon and the gold are great. And the waterfall... And.. well okay I just like it all!

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